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Descriptive writing


The Year 6 children are currently working on descriptive writing.  This is an extract from one of the children's work:


'In the crystal blue sky, the clouds were as pliable as cotton candy: supple and fleecy. The exquisite heather pranced merrily. The scent of freshly-cut grass was in the air swaying side to side joyously. Then there was the gorse, prickly it was, with dazzling yellow leaves. The road rutted up ahead. The bulky mountain was towering on top of us. The stream gushed with spotless water rushing in to meet us and the teal sky showed us its glory.'


 

Posted by: The Teachers on: 25/09/2017

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